Her mind was filled with questions which she had no answers to. The newly wed bride was awaiting for her beloved husband to walk in. She was sitting on the bed leaning against the wall, anxious for what awaits her. As he walked in through the door her heart started to pound hard and her ears went dumb. All she could hear was a vibrating noise amidst the confusion on her mind.
He came and sat near her and grabbed her hand slowly. She held her breath for a second as she realized he was moving closer to her. Before another thought could pass her mind, her lips were locked with his, her first kiss. The warmth shared by his tongue blew away all questions she had on her mind. She gave herself up to this new feeling, a pleasure of some sort. What happened next is anyone’s guess. I know it’s a bit late, however belated April Fool’s Day! 😉
Hi syed great writing. Suspense put on. Whats next after fooling.
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Ahaha.. I’ve written the rest, I’ve no idea what to do with it. Too explicit I think
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Very crisp and engaging. Nice work.
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Thank you Bryan
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Maybe you should expand this tale into a full novel.
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Wow.. Thank you so much… Surely, I’ll try. Can you recommend what you have on your mind?
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You said what happens next is anyone’s guess. That’s an invitation to keep writing and explore more deeply how this relationship proceeded. Readers can get hooked on these kind of love struck plots
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Wow.. Thank you..
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Have you ever thought about changing the name of your blog? To me, it sends the wrong message if you are trying to convey a spiritual tone in your blog.
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Ahaha.. sure. Let me see
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